CHOI (still on his bday...unsay imong gusto,choi?...u giv me a gift, gail? u r so solicitous, gail!) says: gail, ayaw paglihok sa ulo---no unnecessary movement!
choi decided to have less actions for my poem so when the line that says: O GOD HOW GREAT YOU ARE...i just make a palm-to-palm touched of my hands so when I say Oh GOD---i moved or put my clasped hands--no, wait, rather...I RAISED my clasped hands in the air...in front of my forehead (GAIL, ayaw ug salipdi imo dagway,ok, ibutang imo kamot dapit sa agtang or ..basta ayaw salipdi ok!)
first stanza has the lines: I LOOK AROUND AND SEE THE FLOWERS/I COULDNT HELP BUT SAY/HOW WONDERFUL THEY ARE/O GOD HOW GREAT YOU ARE.
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